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The forest was dark, I was as quiet as I could be, carefully paying attention to every sound. I took a few steps. I knew I wasn't supposed to be out here in the dark, but I was a bit lost. I knew my mother was gonna freak, she hated me being in the forest after dark.

"Oh perfect" I mumbled. My phone was dead. How am I gonna get outta here? "Snap!" That wasn't me. Someone was following me, but who? I looked around nervously. No one was there. Maybe it was an animal, I thought worriedly. I kept walking, looking over my shoulder as I went along. Suddenly out of nowhere, someone grabbed my arm.
©2008-2009 ~kayla13138
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I changed this one!!!

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:iconmandyc:
hmm, idk. I'm very confused... on what's going on... Maybe u should be more clear on what's happening.

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
:iconkayla13138:
I just wrote a few sentances I thought of, its not like the first chapter
:iconmandyc:
well, still it loses ppl. U have to be more direct

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
:iconkayla13138:
I changed basically the whole story now its a whole different story. New point. I dont know what to name the girl though. Help me!!!!
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:iconmandyc:
Well first off change the "Snap!" to Snap! It dosen't need to be in quotes. As for the name of the girl hmm... how about Charlotte?

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
:iconkayla13138:
ohhh really good, thats what ill use, i like that name
:iconmandyc:
me 2 :D

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
:iconkayla13138:
AMANDA!!! What should I call my book?

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