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The Boy Next Door- Part 3 by ~kayla13138:iconkayla13138:



We started walking. I sighed, tired after my long day.

"Are you alright" Adam said, concerned.

"Fine, just a little tired"

Then, my legs buckled. I fell to the ground.

"Charlotte, Charlotte" Adam shook me.

I opened my eyes.
"Wh... What happened?"

"You passed out. Are you ok?" he asked nervously.

"Fine, sorry." I was beyond embarressed.

We kept walking, I kept my head turned away because I was crying. Adam kept a close eye on me. I think he noticed I was crying because right before we got to my house he stopped and let me wipe my face off.

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"Charlotte Nicholle Sandell, where have you been!?" my mom screamed.

I sighed, looking at Adam for support. He said nothing, but bit back a laugh.

"In the forest with Adam" I replied hoping she'd buy it. She didnt.

"You get in this house right this second, you are grounded for a week! No computer, no phone, no television!" she yelled, loudly.

I knew that she would give in after I apoligized for a day or so. But, for now I was grounded.

"See you later" I said to Adam.

"Bye, call me when tomorrow" he replied, knowing my mother as well as I did.

I reached the porch of my 3 story house, where I lived with my mom, my 4 older sisters, Rachel, Rebecca, Amanda and Alyssa, and my 2 brothers, Alex and Patrick. Alex is 19, Patrick is 18, Rachel is 19, Rebecca is 18(Patrick's twin sister), Amanda is 17, and Alyssa is 17. Im the youngest, the baby. It stinks having older siblings sometimes. They always tease me about being friends with Adam. I'm the only tomboy out of all my sisters. Everyone else is interested in make up.

"Upstairs, now" my mother exclaimed.

I walked up to my room, which was on the second floor. I had my own room, I was lucky, everyone else had to share. Alex and Patrick, Rachel and Alyssa, and Rebecca and Amanda.
©2008-2009 ~kayla13138
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This isnt much I had to save it really quick! Ill finish it later!
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but bit back a laugh. (This dosen't make sense) BUt, (make it normal, put it in a sentence) call me when tomorrow (fix this), 3 story house, I reached the porch of my 3 story house, where I lived with my mom, my 4 older sisters, Rachel, Rebecca, Amanda and Alyssa, and my 2 brothers, Alex and Patrick. Alex is 17, Patrick is 16, Rachel is 19, Rebecca is 16(Patrick's twin sister), Amanda is 17, and Alyssa is 18. (fix this, get rid of all those commas make sentences out of them only use comas when you need to) Alex and Patrick, Rachel and Alyssa, and Rebecca and Amanda. (this is not necessary)

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny

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